1. Your home and street
2. Your school
3. A park
4. A church or place where you practice religion.
5. A place where you buy things or go shopping.
6. A Government building like the post office, a police station, hospital or librar.
My House on 93rd street is part of my community. The name of my community is Figueroa. My Houese is big and pretty. In my house live a lot people because is a lot family. My house have 5 roos 4 big and 1 small. My street is dangerous because a lot black people and cholos. We play basketball in my street and soccer wit my cousin and my friends. Also wit my mom and my sister.
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17 years ago
This paragraph is excellent!!!!! There are a few spelling mistakes, but it is very good. Be sure to look over all the words and watch your capitalization. And lets try to fix the sentence about "black people and cholos". What do you mean by that sentence?
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